Life’s a nonstop dream
November 19, 2007 at 9:20 pm | In "Fifty Five Words ", poésie | 20 CommentsLife’s like watching a romantic movie,
The tender love blooms romance,
The struggle provides the strength,
The wait teaches patience,
The ever after gives solace,
Movie does finish.
Is that the end?,
Does it mean, “stop dreaming!”?.
Closes his eyes,
Its right there.
Opens them,
It just continues.
Dream’s always on,
Life’s a nonstop dream.
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Prompt this week over at writer’s island is dreams. I have written a lot about how bad I feel because of lack of dreams, you know not figuratively speaking or anything, even just the non meaningful dreams we get, I seem to miss them a lot. So instead I chose to write on a sentiment that we can never stop them, even if we want to they are just there.
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wowwww. beautiful poem.
Dream’s always on,
Life’s a nonstop dream.
so true. i wish all ur dreams will come true.
and plz nvr ever stop dreaming.
tk cr
Comment by preetilata — November 20, 2007 #
i’m always dreaming!!!life’s a nonstop dream…hmmm..nice
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Comment by Thinking aloud — November 20, 2007 #
Beautiful Rambler, I like the movement between sleep and waking and that they never dissapear. I go through stages of not remember my dreams… I wonder sometimes if that is because my daydreaming is so rich, and I would wonder the same for you, as your writing is so imaginative and at the same time, so real… as if there is a difference!
Comment by Lea — November 20, 2007 #
Yes, really wonderful. Life is indeed a non-stop dream, kudos to you for extracting the positives , inspite of the negative and presenting it so beautifully. Thank you and good night!
Comment by UL — November 20, 2007 #
Life’s a non stop dream……dream on…Beautifully worded…..bring on the dreams and the smiles
Comment by prats — November 20, 2007 #
I like the parallel drawn with the movie. But then movies imitate life..
Comment by gautami — November 20, 2007 #
“The struggle provides the strength… Life’s a nonstop dream.”
I find those two phrases so very relevant to how we move though life. Well written!
Comment by Rob Kistner — November 20, 2007 #
love that life’s a nonstop dream!
Comment by Pauline — November 20, 2007 #
you should change your name to virtual romantic!!!! you see the best in so many things….
Comment by paisley — November 20, 2007 #
Very nice poetry and happy dreaming to you
Comment by Terri — November 20, 2007 #
Reminds me of Tibetan dream yoga. Cool.
Comment by mariacristina — November 20, 2007 #
Life IS but a dream
Very nicely written
xo
Comment by Gillian — November 20, 2007 #
This is beautiful. I enjoyed it very very much.
Comment by jadey — November 20, 2007 #
Promising! Zenlike.
Comment by Tumblewords — November 20, 2007 #
I loved the concept!!!
Comment by Sameera — November 21, 2007 #
This has a sweetness and innocence that I find charming. Different from what I expected and very soothing.
Comment by Mary T. — November 21, 2007 #
Life is a non-stop dream, well caught!
Comment by jo — November 21, 2007 #
A non-stop dream for most, a non-stop nightmare for others. Lovely poem.
Comment by keith hillman — November 21, 2007 #
Hey you see colored or b.w dreams ? lol.
fun apart, dreams are a bit enigma. no one knows if they really exist or not. wot we see while snoring is it dreams or just some suppressed thots in the subconscious mind!!!
Comment by Ashu — November 21, 2007 #
so beauiful … i love my dreams, i dream crazy wild colourful long dreams
Comment by daisies — December 4, 2007 #