weekday wants

He ran through his day,
Work and otherwise,
Meetings, Calls and discussions,
Chats, guffaws and occasional piss offs.
Eating into his time.


A chaotic mind,
A restless heart.

A lovely smile,
Few drops of rain,
Some Tasty aroma,
A prospective dream,
An interesting thought trail,
And
His hope.

Amidst waves of chaos.
A Calmness
Unexpected.

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The prompt this week at writer’s island is “unexpected”, so here I am with my usual 55 words :)

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14 Comments »

  1. BlueMist said

    Given all this
    “A lovely smile,
    Few drops of rain,
    Some Tasty aroma,
    A prospective dream,
    An interesting thought trail,
    And
    His hope.”

    Calmness was unexpected ? just curious :)

    yep totally unexpected..not unwanted but unexpected :)
    -Rambler

  2. neilina said

    wow Nice one! I feel the poem picturises you. The green lines are giving such a soothing effect and while reading red one, I remember my office! Nice way to capture ‘unexpected’! I like this post.

    Bless You! ~Namaste~

    Thanks Neilina… your office?? nahi yaar it was supposed to remind you more of the calmness :D
    -Rambler

  3. Geraldine said

    Excellent! You’ve packed a lot of punch into your 55 words. Love it!!! G

    http://www.mypoeticpath.wordpress.com

    Thanks Geraldine
    -Rambler

  4. priyaiyer said

    nice use of colors. :) btw, u hav been tagged…

    Thanks Priya..and thanks for the tag too
    -Rambler

  5. Tammy said

    Isn’t it cool how a these things pop up just when we need them most! Lovely!

    Oh totally cool, and specially when it makes you wonder how lucky you are :)
    -Rambler

  6. Many of my days are like this. And these unexpected moments of quiet and beauty are that much sweeter.

    Susan you put it very well..unexpected moments of quiet :)
    -Rambler

  7. Autumn said

    *sigh* Lovely!

    Thanks Aumumn
    -Rambler

  8. Shubd said

    Isn’t it just wonderful how such sudden , unexpected thoughts and emotions can anchor you through chaotic times !
    As usual you have a fresh and unique perspective to the prompt .

    Thanks for dropping by .

    Thanks Shubd,
    its totally wonderful :)
    -Rambler

  9. Robin said

    Chaos makes the moments of calm all the sweeter.

    Well I would not want chaos, even if it will makes the calmness sweeter :)
    -Rambler

  10. vishesh said

    unexpected is always expected…

    Hm… some times yes
    -Rambler

  11. In many ways, the best kind of days – never know what’s round the corner.

    yep best days..
    -Rambler

  12. neilina said

    Yep! It should remind me of calmness but negativity always capture my mind easily. I should only remember green color here:)!

    not just you, negativity does easily capture all our minds :)
    -Rambler

  13. BlueMist said

    I did not say “unwanted” but given the list of things how the clamness was obvious IMO.

    List of things was obvious, but then the fact that they brought calmness even in the chaotic mind was unexpected, atleast by me :)
    -Rambler

  14. Nova said

    Beautiful :)

    Thanks Nova
    -Rambler

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