They lay there naked,
holding hands,
by the side of a lonely beach,
on a full moon night.
No inhibitions of sorts,
No hesitation in the mind,
No words exchanged,
Silence all around.
Pure love is what they shared.
To break the ice,
He said
“Love is in the air
She replied
“its” existence “questionable”.
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Prompt this week over at writer’s island is “questionable“, and here is my attempt.
ashu said
Are you sure you have writen this ? i read this somewhere else too
Giselle said
hehee.. nice
by the way, did you mean “their” itself in the first line or “there”?
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priyaiyer said
good one!
nice take on the prompt…..
anthonynorth said
Ah, the existence of love. Prompts the question, what is it?
It’s had poets and philosophers in a stew for centuries.
Giselle said
love is in fact something that everyone hungers after but very few find…
Constance said
Probably the wrong time for philosophy. But there never is a good time to wax philosophical, so might as well speak up. *g*
neilina said
Hey, first congrats for coming-up with romantic entry…….hope it continues…
You mind imagines so nicely about romanticism! Continue to write about it. This one has really beautiful imagination!
Whatever doubts I had, all has been answered. I love these lines, “Silence all around, Pure love is what they shared”. One thing, I want to say , if I have to reply the guy’s sentence, I would have said, “its existence….unquestionable”!
Bless You Always! ~Namaste~
jeques said
Nothing calculated, nothing planned… love that happens in spotaneity works magic. I imagine pyrotechnics in the shape of heart as backdrop to this romantic scene. Questionable? nah! As long as the lovers believe.
I wish you well.
~ Jeques
chennairamblings said
Hah
Love is a myth
For the questioning minds
For the accepting
It is simply there
Like air…
Giselle said
nice..
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BlueMist said
Presence of lust;
Kills all other existences;
The believing minds
question the immortal truths !!
Just Jen said
oh how sad. She should have said she was madly in love with him too…okay I’m lying. I liked it and its true…lust and love are two entirely different entities. At least the woman had a grasp on reality
silverneurotic said
Nice. Much better than any poem I could come up with.
preethi said
nice take… questionable indeed
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Sameera said
Very well expressed!
neilina said
Resolutions are meant to be broken
Giselle said
rambler, how do you reply to comments in this manner?do u just edit them so that your reply would be right beneath the comments made? do tell me..
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Vijay Ganesh said
Lovely one
pieceofpie said
it is easy to love the unknown in the dark… great take on the prompt rambler…
Nidhi said
nice one