Platonic lines

A rough wall
and a harder core.

It ain’t no simple
Still, lots to question

Do you let them in,
How far?.
Do you shed your inhibitions,
How much?.
Do you need to censor yourself,
What for?.

Skeptical “me“.

When it comes to friendship
The question always eludes
Where to draw the line.

The “line”.

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The topic over at skittles today is “line” for heads or tails. I generally don’t do poetry for HoT, but todays kind of an exception, could not think anything else but this for the topic. As usual I have limited my expression to 55 words.

20 Comments »

  1. Rash said

    A hard question inded!!
    Nice one? :)

    Thanks Rash
    -Rambler

  2. neilina said

    Does Platonice line need the question ‘where to draw”?
    So many questions………Today my mind is taking me to minus only! May be my mind is becoming pessimistic. Let my mind wait for some time to ruminate them later!
    Thanks for such a post, I really want to think on this!

    Bless You Always! ~Namaste~

    Neilina..well thats the dilemma..would you share everything with your friend, male or female.. I think we do choose to draw the line..and where is a question :)

    -Rambler

  3. Shannon H. said

    Great post! You have my mind working now :)

    Thanks Shannon
    -Rambler

  4. Tammy said

    What a beautiful poem!

    Thanks Tammy
    -Rambler

  5. "SunShine" said

    Loved it totally. I can guess where it is coming from :) and let me know once you get the answers :P

    So where is it coming from ;)
    -Rambler

  6. Sue said

    A very creative response to the theme :) Thank you so much for stopping by!

    Thanks Sue
    -Rambler

  7. Wow! That was a great way to interpret the topic. Drawing the line is something I need to practice.

    Thanks Forgetfulone..its something which we need to practice..but then where to draw the line will be my eternal dilemma :)
    -Rambler

  8. Insightful post.

    MANATEE OF VANITY, at Nickers and Ink

    Blessings,
    Linda

    PS: Don’t forget to play at SIMPLY SNICKERS this week . . . posting new poetry prompts every Sunday.

    Thanks Linda
    -Rambler

  9. priyaiyer said

    this is lovely! nice take on the prompt! :)

    Thanks Priya
    -Rambler

  10. Lea said

    Really great “lines” Ramber!!!

    Thanks Lea :)
    -Rambler

  11. Skittles said

    Beautiful.. I have a hard time knowing where to draw some lines..

    I totally understand what you mean skittles :)
    -Rambler

  12. point to ponder indeed :)

    So where would you draw the line DC?
    -Rambler

  13. super. I would say “no line” !!!

    Well I would want to say no line..but really can you do it?…even in mixed gender friendship?
    -Rambler

  14. whypaisley said

    lighten up,, open up,,, and just be…. it seems so hard to breathe inside that shell….

    It seems hard..but sometimes we are also so comfortable in there that we do not want to risk getting out
    -Rambler

  15. neilina said

    Yeah unknowingly we do draw lines!
    Yeah I will share ‘everything’ with my friend, if I able to find one! Here the problem doesn’t arise because of the line drawn by us but line drawn by them also. Line drawn by them sometimes doesn’t allow us to cross the limit.

    Neilina…somehow did not get what you mean
    -Rambler

  16. preethi said

    Very nice.. there is a thin line, but where is the line??! I love the way you take these topics on a different tangent each time!

    Thanks preethi..I am very happy to see you could make out that tangencys :)
    -Rambler

  17. preethi said

    I tried my hand at this come read – Fun Day

    Great..just checked
    -Rambler

  18. Vic Grace said

    That is a very interesting take on the theme. I like to read poetry, or at least some, but I am not good at it at all. Drawing the line is something I have learned as I grow older, unfortunately it is a skill we needed often when we are younger.

    Thanks Grace
    -Rambler

  19. Tina said

    great ‘line’ poem.

    The question is just that. where do you drawer the line!?

    Thanks for stopping by my hots :)

    Thanks Tina
    -Rambler

  20. neilina said

    Still you haven’t got after so much discussion.. :)

    Hehhe I can be dumb at times
    -Rambler

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