A rough wall
and a harder core.
It ain’t no simple
Still, lots to question
Do you let them in,
How far?.
Do you shed your inhibitions,
How much?.
Do you need to censor yourself,
What for?.
Skeptical “me“.
When it comes to friendship
The question always eludes
Where to draw the line.
The “line”.
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The topic over at skittles today is “line” for heads or tails. I generally don’t do poetry for HoT, but todays kind of an exception, could not think anything else but this for the topic. As usual I have limited my expression to 55 words.


Rash said
A hard question inded!!
Nice one?
neilina said
Does Platonice line need the question ‘where to draw”?
So many questions………Today my mind is taking me to minus only! May be my mind is becoming pessimistic. Let my mind wait for some time to ruminate them later!
Thanks for such a post, I really want to think on this!
Bless You Always! ~Namaste~
Shannon H. said
Great post! You have my mind working now
Tammy said
What a beautiful poem!
"SunShine" said
Loved it totally. I can guess where it is coming from
and let me know once you get the answers
Sue said
A very creative response to the theme
Thank you so much for stopping by!
Forgetfulone said
Wow! That was a great way to interpret the topic. Drawing the line is something I need to practice.
Nickers and Ink said
Insightful post.
MANATEE OF VANITY, at Nickers and Ink
Blessings,
Linda
PS: Don’t forget to play at SIMPLY SNICKERS this week . . . posting new poetry prompts every Sunday.
priyaiyer said
this is lovely! nice take on the prompt!
Lea said
Really great “lines” Ramber!!!
Skittles said
Beautiful.. I have a hard time knowing where to draw some lines..
DreamCatcher said
point to ponder indeed
Vijay Ganesh said
super. I would say “no line” !!!
whypaisley said
lighten up,, open up,,, and just be…. it seems so hard to breathe inside that shell….
neilina said
Yeah unknowingly we do draw lines!
Yeah I will share ‘everything’ with my friend, if I able to find one! Here the problem doesn’t arise because of the line drawn by us but line drawn by them also. Line drawn by them sometimes doesn’t allow us to cross the limit.
preethi said
Very nice.. there is a thin line, but where is the line??! I love the way you take these topics on a different tangent each time!
preethi said
I tried my hand at this come read – Fun Day
Vic Grace said
That is a very interesting take on the theme. I like to read poetry, or at least some, but I am not good at it at all. Drawing the line is something I have learned as I grow older, unfortunately it is a skill we needed often when we are younger.
Tina said
great ‘line’ poem.
The question is just that. where do you drawer the line!?
Thanks for stopping by my hots
neilina said
Still you haven’t got after so much discussion..