Shades of a curious mind

A battle of bigwigs
With no clear upperhand.

Curiosity all around,
Which would “one” choose,
The ever beautiful “mind“,
Or the always satisfying “body“.

I think my temptation caved in,
Killing the curiosity.

Like all other’s from the history,
The curiosity won.

Curious colors of mind,
With colors unseen,
Shades unvisited.

A clear winner indeed.
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The prompt over at writer’s island this week is curiosity..hope this gelled with the prompt :)

13 Comments »

  1. rebecca said

    ah, curiosity and temptation…seductive brothers indeed!

    Rebecca..yeah they are :)
    -Rambler

  2. neilina said

    I love these lines,” Which would one choose, the ever beautiful mind or the always satisfying body”………..
    You have come-out with a stong thought and beautiful words on ‘curiosity’!

    Bless You! ~Namaste~

    Thanks Neilina
    -Rambler

  3. preethi said

    very well said.. curiosity and temptation go hand in hand!!

    Thanks Preethi
    -Rambler

  4. jeques said

    Often, the body desires win over our rational mind ~ both are essential human need that has to be gratified. We are forever caught in an endless internal battle and we need to keep the balance.

    I wish you well.

    ~ Jeques

  5. I really enjoyed your poem.

    Thanks forgetfulone
    -Rambler

  6. Just Jen said

    a little off topic here but I was playing scrabble with my mom and she was all excited that the online dictionary accepted the word bigwig…LOL
    curiosity does make things more exciting-ah the unknown

    JJ, I can’t believe..I looked it up online dictionary before writing the word..I wasn’t sure if it was a real word :)
    -Rambler

  7. marja said

    curiosity and temptation two brothers. Lovely poem especially the last stanza.

    Thanks Marja..like the sibling rivalry between them :)
    -Rambler

  8. The mind allures, the body tempts
    And once the body satisfies, it is the mind’s turn to crave
    So guess you made the best choice :)

    Well its been a age old choice..but even though it looks obvious..body can be tempting way too much :)
    -Rambler

  9. Temptation is perhaps the mother of curiosity.
    Excellent poem.

    Thanks Anthony…oh never saw it that way..temptation being the mother of curiosity..I always thought curiosity is the mother of temptation :)
    -Rambler

  10. Rash said

    Beautiful indeed!

    Thanks Rash
    -Rambler

  11. Autumn said

    Once again, your words…there’s just no expressing. Wonderful!

    Thanks Autumn
    -Rambler

  12. Sameera said

    And this one is a sure winner indeed! :)

    Thanks Sam
    -Rambler

  13. texasblu said

    The war rages within ourselves – very cleverly done, Rambler! I’m sorry it’s taken me a week to get back to you – I had family visiting for a wk! :)

    Thanks Texasblue..
    -Rambler

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