Conscience

July 7, 2008 at 10:08 pm · Filed under "Fifty Five Words ", "Theory of pursuit", Thoughts, thoughts to think

You open the book for me,
And put words in my mouth,
And before I can mouth them,
You make me forget too.
Like the pictures you draw,
And patterns you make me see,
And before I can match,
You dissolve them too.

Choice isn’t easy.
Nope,
Not with you around.
Not without you either.

8 Comments »

  1. Lea said

    July 8, 2008 @ 2:57 am

    These books, though hard to read… they are life… dare we turn the pages???

    I love this…

    You open the book for me,
    And put words in my mouth,
    And before I can mouth them,
    You make me forget too…

    Lea..they are tough to read indeed..and sometimes its someone else who turns the pages for us
    -Rambler

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  2. neilina said

    July 8, 2008 @ 8:36 am

    wow Wondeful! I just loved the way it ended. The flow of each word makes my heart to sequeeze to give out such a strong question for which answer is not there. A very fantastic poetry to start your day with! :) It will surely make me to think and think……
    I am wondering what made you to write this, like from where these words came……….
    I am copying this one also………. :)
    My fav lines are:-
    Choice isn’t easy.
    Nope,
    Not with you around
    Not without you either!

    Thanks Neilina..glad you liked it
    -Rambler

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  3. CONSCIENCE « SING WITH YOUR HEART said

    July 8, 2008 @ 8:42 am

    [...] ~Rambler (http://virtualrambling.wordpress.com/2008/07/07/conscience/) [...]

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  4. Silvara said

    July 8, 2008 @ 12:02 pm

    Lovely! :)

    Thanks Silvara..welcome here
    -Rambler

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  5. BlueMist said

    July 8, 2008 @ 7:42 pm

    Yeah I know. I have some of these people in my life. But I guess being with them is a better choice than being without !!

    BM ..hmm not sure if I got your comment.
    -Rambler

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  6. Sameera said

    July 8, 2008 @ 8:05 pm

    A nice portrayal of ironies in 55 words! :)

    Thanks Sameera.
    -Rambler

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  7. marja said

    July 10, 2008 @ 7:32 am

    Very clever rambler Especially loved the last lines

    Thanks Marja
    -Rambler

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  8. Saumya said

    July 19, 2008 @ 11:24 am

    The last few lines are beautiful…

    ” Choice isn’t easy.
    Nope,
    Not with you around.
    Not without you either. ”

    N.I.C.E

    Thanks Saumya.
    -Rambler

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