Days ahead


fueled by her smiles,
I take the flight of laughter,
to joyous future.

The prompt this week over at writer’s island is flight, I thought of this haiku, its been quite a while since I attempted a haiku, hope it does put across what I wanted to convey.



24 responses »

  1. ๐Ÿ™‚ very sweet and romantic. watsup???

    Thanks priya..yep need to check out, what happened..why am I thinking romantic these days lol

  2. Flight of Laughter. I couldn’t ever have come up w/ that! Nice! ๐Ÿ˜€

    Thanks Suraksha, may be you would have come up with something much better ๐Ÿ™‚

  3. Wow, the flight of laughter (in my imagination) is like a spiral staircase going up and up into the clouds and on and on to a paradisical place! Fueled by her smiles, I take the flight of laughter, running towards my joyous future..
    Of course it would take me a chapter to write what you achieved in just seventeen sylables. Wonderful!

    thanks for a lovely comment. yes I did mean to say that laughter gives me a great high, almost the feel of a paradiscal place.

  4. @Rambler:
    Ah. ๐Ÿ™‚ I don’t know. There’s very little that can be as beautifully graphic as a Flight of Laughter. Besides, I don’t even think I WANT to come up w/ something better. This is perfect as it is! ๐Ÿ˜€

    Suraksha, ah now that makes it sound perfect ๐Ÿ™‚

  5. This is wonderful! You have written it very nicely with great imagination……
    A crowd of people;
    As much an inspiration
    As viwes breathtaking

    Bless You! ~Namaste~ Nidhi

  6. This Haiku was sweet…. Going through the older ones in your blog. Seem interesting.

    Thanks let me know what you thought about the old ones as well

  7. beautiful!!!!!
    I was so struck by it, I just wanted to do something beautiful at the very moment..
    You have a gift rambler… Keep harnessing it..

    Thanks Rusty..oh do tell me what you did ๐Ÿ™‚
    and thank you so much for the kind words

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