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fueled by her smiles,
I take the flight of laughter,
to joyous future.

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The prompt this week over at writer’s island is flight, I thought of this haiku, its been quite a while since I attempted a haiku, hope it does put across what I wanted to convey.

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  1. ๐Ÿ™‚ very sweet and romantic. watsup???

    Thanks priya..yep need to check out, what happened..why am I thinking romantic these days lol
    -Rambler

  2. Flight of Laughter. I couldn’t ever have come up w/ that! Nice! ๐Ÿ˜€

    Thanks Suraksha, may be you would have come up with something much better ๐Ÿ™‚
    -Rambler

  3. Wow, the flight of laughter (in my imagination) is like a spiral staircase going up and up into the clouds and on and on to a paradisical place! Fueled by her smiles, I take the flight of laughter, running towards my joyous future..
    Of course it would take me a chapter to write what you achieved in just seventeen sylables. Wonderful!

    STG,
    thanks for a lovely comment. yes I did mean to say that laughter gives me a great high, almost the feel of a paradiscal place.
    -Rambler

  4. @Rambler:
    Ah. ๐Ÿ™‚ I don’t know. There’s very little that can be as beautifully graphic as a Flight of Laughter. Besides, I don’t even think I WANT to come up w/ something better. This is perfect as it is! ๐Ÿ˜€

    Suraksha, ah now that makes it sound perfect ๐Ÿ™‚
    -Rambler

  5. This is wonderful! You have written it very nicely with great imagination……
    A crowd of people;
    As much an inspiration
    As viwes breathtaking

    Bless You! ~Namaste~ Nidhi

  6. This Haiku was sweet…. Going through the older ones in your blog. Seem interesting.

    Thanks Medhini..do let me know what you thought about the old ones as well
    -Rambler

  7. beautiful!!!!!
    I was so struck by it, I just wanted to do something beautiful at the very moment..
    You have a gift rambler… Keep harnessing it..

    Thanks Rusty..oh do tell me what you did ๐Ÿ™‚
    and thank you so much for the kind words
    -Rambler

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