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An excuse to be happy

I have been smiling for no reason today,
I don’t need an excuse to be happy today,
For once life has been so different today,
I have been smiling for no reason today.
Amidst dirty droplets of life, its been a rainbow today,
All I Wish for, are more days, just like today,
I don’t need an excuse to be happy today,
I have been smiling for no reason today,

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Its been a long time since I participated in Totally optional prompts. Prompt today over their is triolet, its a kind of poetry which follows the rhyme patters ABaAabBA, its an eight line poetry where 1,4,7 lines are same, and also 2,6 are same. Thought I should give a try. You can read more about triolet here Poets.org.

23 thoughts on “An excuse to be happy

  1. Nicely done πŸ˜›
    I never could write anything to any meter 😦

    And I am smiling today
    Reading this little piece of joy you sent my way

    Thank You.

    CR.. thanks for smiling πŸ™‚
    -Rambler

  2. Hey, you have written this????? Really m surprised! It is really a very very nice poem. Keep going………it is making my day wonderful, a smile on my face without any reason! πŸ™‚

    Bless You! ~Namaste~

    Ha Ha..now “yyou have written this”..is this is a good or bad way? πŸ™‚
    nice to know it brought a smile on your face.
    -Rambler

  3. I love the image of dirty droplets of life. Excellent.

    Some times all we see are dirty droplets and not the rainbow attached along
    -Rambler

  4. I am laghing for many reaosns today πŸ™‚

    and well that was a nice piece πŸ˜‰

    kinda lil bit kiddish…but then…it makes u smile for no reaosn… **purpose served** no?

    Veens..
    Thank you..glad to know you are laughing too
    actually a very interesting comment you make here..would be fun to know why you felt kiddish..
    -Rambler

  5. Nice job. I had a tough time with this form and ended up abandoning my efforts. Oh well. πŸ™‚

    Mad Kane..believe me I too had a tough time..just that I posted whatever I could come up with πŸ™‚
    -Rambler

  6. aha ! πŸ™‚
    nice i really liked this one
    short and sweet !
    wish there was rainbow everyday ….
    but then i guess how would there be a rainbow without the gloominess of the rainy sky first

  7. This one bought a smile to my heart.. πŸ™‚ Wishing you more of these days.. πŸ™‚

    Thanks nrsl..I too wish for more such days you know πŸ™‚
    -Rambler

  8. That sweet poem made me full of envy..people are indeed lucky to be filled with such joy..
    Wish you the best πŸ™‚

    Thanks Lubna
    -Rambler

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