weekday wants

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He ran through his day,
Work and otherwise,
Meetings, Calls and discussions,
Chats, guffaws and occasional piss offs.
Eating into his time.


A chaotic mind,
A restless heart.

A lovely smile,
Few drops of rain,
Some Tasty aroma,
A prospective dream,
An interesting thought trail,
And
His hope.

Amidst waves of chaos.
A Calmness
Unexpected.

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The prompt this week at writer’s island is “unexpected”, so here I am with my usual 55 words 🙂

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14 responses »

  1. Given all this
    “A lovely smile,
    Few drops of rain,
    Some Tasty aroma,
    A prospective dream,
    An interesting thought trail,
    And
    His hope.”

    Calmness was unexpected ? just curious 🙂

    yep totally unexpected..not unwanted but unexpected 🙂
    -Rambler

  2. wow Nice one! I feel the poem picturises you. The green lines are giving such a soothing effect and while reading red one, I remember my office! Nice way to capture ‘unexpected’! I like this post.

    Bless You! ~Namaste~

    Thanks Neilina… your office?? nahi yaar it was supposed to remind you more of the calmness 😀
    -Rambler

  3. Isn’t it cool how a these things pop up just when we need them most! Lovely!

    Oh totally cool, and specially when it makes you wonder how lucky you are 🙂
    -Rambler

  4. Isn’t it just wonderful how such sudden , unexpected thoughts and emotions can anchor you through chaotic times !
    As usual you have a fresh and unique perspective to the prompt .

    Thanks for dropping by .

    Thanks Shubd,
    its totally wonderful 🙂
    -Rambler

  5. Yep! It should remind me of calmness but negativity always capture my mind easily. I should only remember green color here:)!

    not just you, negativity does easily capture all our minds 🙂
    -Rambler

  6. I did not say “unwanted” but given the list of things how the clamness was obvious IMO.

    List of things was obvious, but then the fact that they brought calmness even in the chaotic mind was unexpected, atleast by me 🙂
    -Rambler

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