Eyes

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Manner,
In which,
You,
Close,
your eyes,
the,
slowness,
with which,
you open,
them,
makes me,
forget my,
manners.

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Prompt over at skittles today is “manner”. Pathetic state my mind is in, only thing I could think of, was this.

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17 responses »

  1. Aaahaa…….I can see green signal given to your parents 😉 It is reflecting in each line of your poem…..hehehehe
    Anyways, nice take on ‘manners’ and this one is deadly romantic 😀
    But why pathetic, what is behind the cover? 🙂

    ~Blessings~ ~Namaste~

  2. Thanks for visiting Small Reflections this morning. I left a comment at Blogger … looks like you’re collecting some SPAM there. I love your poetic response to this week’s HoTs post and like the look of your new WordPress site. If you don’t mind me asking … are you using the free service or paying for the platform … and did you find the transition easy or challenging? I’ve given thought to switching myself, but figure I’ve just learned to negotiate Blogger and ‘the devil I know’ might be easier to deal with than the one I don’t.
    Hugs and blessings,

  3. now this poem added with the clause ‘pathetic state of mind’ has sure raised everyone’s antenna..what is going on? rambler’s forgetting his manners?

    😉

  4. Thanks Veens…btw why naughty?

    Thanks Tina

    Nahh..not green signal..if this were to be that …then I would be long married now 😀

    Thanks Brian…btw how sensual?

    Storyteller..I use the free service of wordpress…and the migration was pretty easy

    Tumblewords..thanks!

    Thanks Sameera..

    Romancist..wow thats a new word preethi

    Shannon..Naughty?/?

    Suma…why shouldn’t I? 🙂

    Thanks peppy lady

    Prakar..bliss is a big word 🙂

    Thanks Geraldine

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