Cozy Afternoons


Those cozy afternoons,

Dark clouds around,

Us by our porch,

And you by my side.

A familiar sensuous smell,

Driving me wild.

Your gentle warmth,

Casting a deadly spell.

Those anxious moments,

And the final plunge,

When my lips met you,

Soft ripples around.

Those cozy afternoons

With you by my side.

Us by our porch,

Dark clouds around.

The topic over at sunday scribblings this week is ‘coffee’, my mind has kind of been rusty when it comes to blogging, so please bear with my rusty response to the prompt

27 responses »

  1. If I would haven’t read the topic ‘coffee’, I would have been taken this ‘Cozy Afternoon’ in different way πŸ˜€

    Beautiful! Every word made me to picturize the porch scene with each and every tiny moment. Lovely!
    Keep going Mr. Rambler….

  2. Neilina..I guess the intention was to deceive :) how would you describe your cozy afternoons ? ..

    Akshaya..wasted?..thats interesting πŸ˜€

    Thanks Priya I this was a surprise..where have you hidden yourself? for as reality is concerned was just the coffee πŸ˜‰

    Anthony..loved your last sentence πŸ™‚

    Thanks B Roan, Blisful anonimity, Kris

    Derique..dark..never thought of my poem that way, but then now your comment made me think..

    GG..I hope the lady shares the same opinion about me as you πŸ˜€

    Thanks kind words don’t think that I equate women to coffee. hehhe πŸ˜€

    Paisley…well a real women by the side..might totally change my perspective πŸ˜€

    Thanks Lela B

    Tumblewords..thanks for such lovely words of encouragement

    Saumya..common I am sure you wouldn’t have been know my cozy afternoons πŸ˜€

    Thanks Susan.. thats a good expression..Akshata

  3. I think you did well – rusty or not! πŸ™‚

    And I’ve been known to take a break myself. I get melancholy and loose my love for writing for awhile, but it always seems to come back.

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