Kiss
May 11, 2008 at 4:20 pm | In "Fifty Five Words ", Fiction, Personal, poetry | 21 CommentsIt was never meant,
to be this way.
A feeling of guilt,
Is here to stay.
You said, its gonna be
Just another kiss
A pair of closed eyes, and,
A moment of bliss.
I knew you were wrong,
I just went along.
Moments like these are
seldom un-meaningful,
A “kiss”
never unfaithful
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I promise that this shall be the last of my romantic poems .. 
The prompt today over at writersisland is “unfaithful”. Should I add that here’s my “fictional” piece on the prompt 
The movie prompt over there this week is “fantasy”, I did this some time back, thought will add the link here
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and why make that the last… you have yet to begin life’s real romance…. i say this is just a stepping stone……
Comment by whypaisley — May 11, 2008 #
This reminds me of “Last Christmas” by George Michael
And I love this one too…but a kiss being “just a kiss”, ah, too many people think that
Comment by chennairamblings — May 11, 2008 #
Lets c if this is your last romantic poem…..hihihihihi. I am sure it won’t be…lets c that too!
Why these moments are un-meaningful when it has kiss which is not faithful? I love these lines….moments like these are seldom unmeaningful, a ‘kiss’ never unfaithful. I am stuck here and thinking over it.
I like the flow here, it goes so natural.
Bless You. ~Namaste~
Comment by Neilina — May 11, 2008 #
just a kiss it was?
Comment by vishesh — May 11, 2008 #
lol..romantic huh?
Comment by brocas area — May 11, 2008 #
Having done the occasional romance myself, keep them coming
Comment by anthonynorth — May 11, 2008 #
why are you so against being a romantic? At heart you are one. So you should be able to write your feelings (fictional or otherwise) without bothering about who thinks what.
Dont be cautious, let go and see what the freedom does to you!
Comment by rustyneurons — May 11, 2008 #
No. Surely not the last. You have your whole life ahead of you and so many wonderful love experiences to come – and believe me, when they do, you will not be able to stop the words from flowing from you!
Comment by Absolute Vanilla (and Atyllah) — May 12, 2008 #
Very good rambler Love it. Don’t stop now You are getting the hang of it.
Comment by marja — May 12, 2008 #
Comment by priyaiyer — May 12, 2008 #
Why try turning against the tide…
romantic you are…so just let it stay.
Beuatiful and heartfelt.
Comment by prats — May 12, 2008 #
sooo true!
Comment by gunj — May 12, 2008 #
heh..heh..always the escape clause written there bold and clear…
now who’s being unfaithful here?
r
Comment by Thinking aloud — May 12, 2008 #
This is well done!
By the way, your profile links still take us to Blogger.
Pen-Pals, eh?
Linda
Nickers and Ink
Comment by Linda — May 12, 2008 #
[...] Other blogs, mèmè) Yesterday, I did my 500th post over here at virtual rambling. Yep “Kiss” was my 500th post on this blog. I can’t believe that I just did that, remembering [...]
Pingback by 500, going onto 501 « Virtual Ramblings — May 12, 2008 #
last in ‘romantic’ poetry???
no waysss…
we want more!
Comment by pri — May 13, 2008 #
It was a nice attempt,why be the last?
Comment by Sameera — May 13, 2008 #
Ahh, but a kiss is rarely just a kiss.
Comment by Robin — May 13, 2008 #
I like it – don’t stop now!
Comment by texasblu — May 13, 2008 #
Oh, be as romantic as you want! Besides, this is more reality than romance, ya know? In romance, there’s that whole happy ending stuff and this most certainly is not happy! (for which I’m pleased to see)
Comment by Susan Helene Gottfried — May 13, 2008 #
Please don’t laugh. I never had a romantic kiss with anyone. I am patiently waiting for the right person for the perfect kiss.
I wish you well.
~ Jeques
Comment by jeques — May 15, 2008 #