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Kiss

It was never meant,
to be this way.
A feeling of guilt,
Is here to stay.
You said, its gonna be
Just another kiss
A pair of closed eyes, and,
A moment of bliss.
I knew you were wrong,
I just went along.
Moments like these are
seldom un-meaningful,
A “kiss”
never unfaithful

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I promise that this shall be the last of my romantic poems .. 🙂

The prompt today over at writersisland is “unfaithful”. Should I add that here’s my “fictional” piece on the prompt 😀

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The movie prompt over there this week is “fantasy”, I did this some time back, thought will add the link here

My Fantasy

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21 thoughts on “Kiss

  1. and why make that the last… you have yet to begin life’s real romance…. i say this is just a stepping stone……

    actually I am getting bored and a little emberassed at my take on romance..so I might stop writing on that subject for a while
    -Rambler

  2. This reminds me of “Last Christmas” by George Michael 🙂
    And I love this one too…but a kiss being “just a kiss”, ah, too many people think that

    CR..I never agree with that..it can never be just a kiss.
    -Rambler

  3. Lets c if this is your last romantic poem…..hihihihihi. I am sure it won’t be…lets c that too! 🙂 Why these moments are un-meaningful when it has kiss which is not faithful? I love these lines….moments like these are seldom unmeaningful, a ‘kiss’ never unfaithful. I am stuck here and thinking over it.

    I like the flow here, it goes so natural.

    Bless You. ~Namaste~

    Neilina..I know I cannot promise :D..but I will try…
    -Rambler

  4. why are you so against being a romantic? At heart you are one. So you should be able to write your feelings (fictional or otherwise) without bothering about who thinks what.
    Dont be cautious, let go and see what the freedom does to you!

    Rusty…hmm that “who” here is me..so as long my thought does not change, my embarrassment at my own take on romance may not go 🙂
    -Rambler

  5. No. Surely not the last. You have your whole life ahead of you and so many wonderful love experiences to come – and believe me, when they do, you will not be able to stop the words from flowing from you!

    Vanilla..lets see how it goes 🙂
    -Rambler

  6. Very good rambler Love it. Don’t stop now You are getting the hang of it.

    Marja..really? am not sure about the hang
    -Rambler

  7. 🙂 nice one.. i agree with rusty, btw.

    thanks Priya..same response to you, as I have given to rusty 🙂
    -Rambler

  8. Why try turning against the tide…
    romantic you are…so just let it stay.

    Beuatiful and heartfelt.

    Thanks Prats..as I said before..I do get embarrassed easily.
    -Rambler

  9. This is well done!

    By the way, your profile links still take us to Blogger. 😉

    Pen-Pals, eh? 😉

    Linda
    Nickers and Ink

    Linda..yeah my profile does take me to old link in blogger.not sure how to change it
    -Rambler

  10. Oh, be as romantic as you want! Besides, this is more reality than romance, ya know? In romance, there’s that whole happy ending stuff and this most certainly is not happy! (for which I’m pleased to see)

    Susan..Romance is so individual..atleast according to me..and I am not sure why you think so, this was indeed happy..
    -Rambler

  11. Please don’t laugh. I never had a romantic kiss with anyone. I am patiently waiting for the right person for the perfect kiss.

    I wish you well.

    ~ Jeques

    join the club Jeques 😀
    -Rambler

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