It was never meant,
to be this way.
A feeling of guilt,
Is here to stay.
You said, its gonna be
Just another kiss
A pair of closed eyes, and,
A moment of bliss.
I knew you were wrong,
I just went along.
Moments like these are
seldom un-meaningful,
A “kiss”
never unfaithful
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I promise that this shall be the last of my romantic poems ..
The prompt today over at writersisland is “unfaithful”. Should I add that here’s my “fictional” piece on the prompt
The movie prompt over there this week is “fantasy”, I did this some time back, thought will add the link here


whypaisley said
and why make that the last… you have yet to begin life’s real romance…. i say this is just a stepping stone……
chennairamblings said
This reminds me of “Last Christmas” by George Michael
And I love this one too…but a kiss being “just a kiss”, ah, too many people think that
Neilina said
Lets c if this is your last romantic poem…..hihihihihi. I am sure it won’t be…lets c that too!
Why these moments are un-meaningful when it has kiss which is not faithful? I love these lines….moments like these are seldom unmeaningful, a ‘kiss’ never unfaithful. I am stuck here and thinking over it.
I like the flow here, it goes so natural.
Bless You. ~Namaste~
vishesh said
just a kiss it was?
brocas area said
lol..romantic huh?
anthonynorth said
Having done the occasional romance myself, keep them coming
rustyneurons said
why are you so against being a romantic? At heart you are one. So you should be able to write your feelings (fictional or otherwise) without bothering about who thinks what.
Dont be cautious, let go and see what the freedom does to you!
Absolute Vanilla (and Atyllah) said
No. Surely not the last. You have your whole life ahead of you and so many wonderful love experiences to come – and believe me, when they do, you will not be able to stop the words from flowing from you!
marja said
Very good rambler Love it. Don’t stop now You are getting the hang of it.
priyaiyer said
prats said
Why try turning against the tide…
romantic you are…so just let it stay.
Beuatiful and heartfelt.
gunj said
sooo true!
Thinking aloud said
heh..heh..always the escape clause written there bold and clear…
now who’s being unfaithful here?
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Linda said
This is well done!
By the way, your profile links still take us to Blogger.
Pen-Pals, eh?
Linda
Nickers and Ink
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pri said
last in ‘romantic’ poetry???
no waysss…
we want more!
Sameera said
It was a nice attempt,why be the last?
Robin said
Ahh, but a kiss is rarely just a kiss.
texasblu said
I like it – don’t stop now!
Susan Helene Gottfried said
Oh, be as romantic as you want! Besides, this is more reality than romance, ya know? In romance, there’s that whole happy ending stuff and this most certainly is not happy! (for which I’m pleased to see)
jeques said
Please don’t laugh. I never had a romantic kiss with anyone. I am patiently waiting for the right person for the perfect kiss.
I wish you well.
~ Jeques